旅行英语作文1

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4、于是哥哥就给我讲动听的故事。他一边讲我们一边走，不知不觉走了很远。哥哥问我：“你还累吗?”呵呵，我早把“累”这回事忘到九霄云外去了。

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6、withalltheseadvantagesoftravel,itisnowonderthattravelhasnowbecomemorepopularthaneverinchina、

二、文章的衔接与连贯

8、修改的主要任务是检查一下有无拼写和语法方面的错误，同时注意是否用词有过多的重复。

9、我喜欢在假期跟哥哥一起徒步旅行。刚开始的时候，我还真有点吃不消，没走多远就累得上气不接下气。

10、我喜欢在假期跟哥哥一起徒步旅行。刚开始的时候，我还真有点吃不消，没走多远就累得上气不接下气。于是哥哥就给我讲动听的故事。他一边讲我们一边走，不知不觉走了很远。哥哥问我：“你还累吗?”呵呵，我早把“累”这回事忘到九霄云外去了。

11、Thenmybrotheraskedme,"Areyoustillfeelingtired?"Thefeelingsoftirednesswerealreadyoutofmymind、

12、Thisholiday,IwanttogotoBeijing、Onthefirstday,IamgoingtoclimbtheGreatWall、Onthesecondday,IamgoingtovisitSummerPlace、Onthethirdday,IamgoingtoLanzhoubyplane、

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15、travelisbeneficialtousinatleastthreeways、first,bytravelingwecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryindifferentplaces、wewillseewithourowneyesmanyplacesreadofinbooks,andvisitsomefamouscitiesandscenicspots、

旅行英语作文2

advantagesoftravel

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3、second,wewillmeetpeoplewithdifferentinterestsandseestrangeanddifferentthingswhenwetravel、wecangetideasoftheconditionsandcustomsofotherpeople,tastedifferentfoodsandlocalflavoursifwelike、inthisway,wecanunderstandhowdifferentlyotherpeoplelive、

4、总之，在写作时切忌一边想一边写。

5、IliketravelingonfootWithmybrotherinholidays、Attheverybeginning,Ifeltverytired、Igotoutofbreathsoeasily、Thenmybrotherstartedtotellmesomeinterestingstories、Wewalkedandwalkedwhilehedidn'tstoptellingstories、Wewalkedalongwaywithoutknowing、Thenmybrotheraskedme,"Areyoustillfeelingtired?"Thefeelingsoftirednesswerealreadyoutofmymind、

6、Attheverybeginning,Ifeltverytired、Igotoutofbreathsoeasily、Thenmybrotherstartedtotellmesomeinterestingstories、Wewalkedandwalkedwhilehedidn'tstoptellingstories、Wewalkedalongwaywithoutknowing、

7、Sportsbenefitusinmanyrespects、Whentakingpartinsports,wegetthechancetotrainalmostallpartsofourbody、Thereisnodoubtthatproperlybalancedphysicalactivitieskeepusphysicallyfit、Furthermore,sportscanenrichourlifeandmaintainourpsychologicalhealth、Throughparticipation,everyonecanlearnthatontheplayingfieldhenotonlycompetesforhimselfbutalsoforhisteam、Sportsteachusaboutconsideration,cooperationandoptimism,andhowtocopewithdifficulties、

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9、Theweatherhasbeenchangeable、OnSundaywehadahighwindthatblewdownsometrees、Mondaywassocoldthatwehadtoturnontheheatandwearoutwintercoats、OnTuesdayweformedagrouptogorollerskating、ByWednesdaytheweatherclearedandthesuncameout、ThursdaywasashotandhumidasanAugustday、Fridaymorningitbegantorain,anditlooksasifwe’llhaveacold,steadywindforafewdays、

10、IliketravelingonfootWithmybrotherinholidays、

11、Tourismcanrelax,butalotofthingstospendmoneytobuyawasteofcomparison,thespringtraveleasilyinfectedwithdiseases,drysummertravelcomparedtoonlysuitableforsummer,autumntravelrelativelydull,wintertourism,Iamalittleromantic,notonlyIsawasteofmoney、

12、第一句是本段的主题句，接下来作者从体育运动对身体的好处说了

13、徒步旅行-TravelonFoot

14、这一段写“最近天气多变”，首句为主题句。扩展句叙述了星期日、星期一、星期三、星期四和星期五的天气情况，用以展开关键词changeable。但星期二没有提天气，而是说当天的活动安排，偏离了主题，打断了段落叙述的连贯性，破坏了段落逻辑意义的统一性，应删去或改为与天气有关的话。

15、在评分标准中，同是否扣题同样重要的是文章的连贯性。往往有的文章扣题倒也扣题了，但还是得不了几分，这其中的原因恐怕与连贯性有很大的关系。这里所说的连贯有两两层含义。一是指文章在内容上是连贯、统一的，文章中所有的句子都是为全文的中心服务的。就各段而言，其中的每一句话都要紧紧围绕着该段的主题句进行，不能说与主题句无关的东西。有人也将其称为统一性。请看一例：

旅行英语作文3

1、third,travelwillnotonlyhelpustogainknowledgeofgeographyandhistoryandotherknowledge,whichwillarouseourdeeploveforourmotherland,butalsowillhelpuskeephealthyandmakeuslessnarrow-minded、traveldoesbenefitusbothmentallyandphysically、